The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented line graph illustrates the amount of worldwide guests visiting
to
the Remove the preposition
apply
UK
for various aims from 1989 and 2009. From an overall
perspective, it can be seen that although
there was a fluctuation trend
, holiday was the most common reason to go to the UK
throughout the intervening years
.
Examining the details, starting with more than 6 millions
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million
of
people who visit the Change preposition
apply
UK
, the trend
was
rose significantly to exactly 9 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
around the next 7 Change to singular
million
years
. However
, it began
sharply dropped to less than its initial position in 2004 and continued climbing to Verb problem
apply
the
9 Correct article usage
apply
millions
in 2009, making it the biggest proportion among others. Change to singular
million
Additionally
, business was recorded as the second highest purposes
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purpose
to
the Change preposition
in
UK
. In the first year, it has 5 millions
and Change to singular
million
then
decline
to four Change the verb form
declines
millions
in the next two Change to singular
million
years
.
Moving on to the other reasons, the number of population that come
to the Wrong verb form
came
UK
in the first year were
5 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
millions
. Despite it Change to singular
million
has
dropped to 4 Wrong verb form
having
millions
, there Change to singular
million
were
an upward Change the verb form
was
trend
to exactly 8 millions
in the next ten Change to singular
million
years
. Nonetheless
, the year 2009 witnessed a fell
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fall
number
, being 7 Change preposition
in number
millions
of the total. Fix the agreement mistake
million
Additionally
, in 1989, around 3,5 millions
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million
of
people who chose Change preposition
apply
UK
for their Correct article usage
the UK
destitation
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destination
was
for meeting their Correct subject-verb agreement
were
surrounding
. Fix the agreement mistake
surroundings
Furthermore
, the trend
has
slightly increased to 7 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
in 2009 and dropped a million to 6 by the end of the period. It is becoming the least preferable Change to singular
million
reasons
to visit the territory of the Fix the agreement mistake
reason
UK
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, trend, years, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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