The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented line graph illustrates the amount of worldwide guests visiting

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the

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for various aims from 1989 and 2009. From an

overall

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perspective, it can be seen that

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there was a fluctuation

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, holiday was the most common reason to go to the

UK

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throughout the intervening

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. Examining the details, starting with more than 6

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millions

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of

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people who visit the

UK

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rose significantly to exactly 9

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millions

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around the next 7

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.

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, it

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sharply dropped to less than its initial position in 2004 and continued climbing to

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9

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in 2009, making it the biggest proportion among others.

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, business was recorded as the second highest

purposes

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to

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the

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. In the first year, it has 5

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millions

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and

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decline

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to four

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in the next two

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. Moving on to the other reasons, the number of population that

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to the

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in the first year

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5

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. Despite it

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dropped to 4

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, there

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an upward

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to exactly 8

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in the next ten

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.

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, the year 2009 witnessed a

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number

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, being 7

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millions

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of the total.

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, in 1989, around 3,5

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of

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people who chose

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UK

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for their

destitation

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for meeting their

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.

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slightly increased to 7

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in 2009 and dropped a million to 6 by the end of the period. It is becoming the least preferable

reasons

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to visit the territory of the

UK

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.