Task 1; The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The given two bar graphs illustrate information about what the graduate and

postgraduate’s

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postgraduate

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students

did after finishing their studies in university if they didn’t find

a full-time work

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full-time work

a full-time job

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, in the year

of

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apply

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2008.

Overall

, what stands out from the graphs is that

,

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there were a

significant

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larger number of graduate

students

than

postgraduate’s

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students

,

while

they had a similar distribution in these four options. Another interesting point is that more

students

would probably prefer to get higher degrees,

while

only a few graduates would work for charity. For the first graph, we can find that more

students

chose to get a

further

study, with a number of 29665. There was a similar situation between part-time work and unemployment, with 17735 and 16235 respectively.

However

, there were only 3500

students

who went to do charity work, and it was almost

one tenth

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of the figure

of

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for

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further

study. There was

similarity

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the similarity

a similarity

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between these two graphs, the biggest and smallest figures

were

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with the same aspect, but had different

relationship

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between the top two figures. There was a large gap

them

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between them

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for the first graph,

however

, when it comes to the second chart, most

students

preferred to get a higher degree, closely followed by those who wanted to get a part-time job, both of them were just above 2500. There was

also

a group of graduates who could not find a job, with 1625, which was 5 times as many as that in voluntary works