The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts
a
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biofuel production which is
Ethanol
. It is a circle
which
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consisting of eight steps from initial carbon dioxide to final
Ethanol
.
Moreover
, the final
ethanol
will join the circle
in
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the next time. In the first stage, one important ingredient is carbon dioxide, which comes from various vehicles including airplanes, trucks and cars. They flow to forests and mix with sunlight, both being
intook
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taken
by plants and trees to grow vividly. Once mature, the woods are harvested and transported to pre-process where trunks and leaves are smashed in order to own Cellulose for the following process. The extracted Cellulose is conveyed to laboratories for
further
processing. Once the Cellulose is tackled, the resulting sugars are observed.
Following
this
, microbes are added
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sugars before going to the final step.
Subsequently
, the added
microbes
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sugars are produced
to
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Ethanol
. In the
last
step,
Ethanol
takes part in producing carbon dioxide over and over again.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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