Task 1; The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The given two bar graphs illustrate information about what the graduate and postgraduate
students
did after finishing their studies in university if they didn’t find a full-time job, in the year 2008.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that,
there were a significantly larger number of graduate Remove the comma
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students
than postgraduate students
, while
they had a similar distribution in these four options. Another interesting point is that more students
would probably prefer to get higher degrees, while
only a few graduates would work for charity.
For the first graph, we can find that more students
chose to get a further
study, with a number of 29665. There was a similar situation between part-time work and unemployment, with 17735 and 16235 respectively. However
, there were only 3500 students
who went to do charity work, and it was almost one-tenth of the figure for further
study.
There was a similarity between these two graphs, the biggest and smallest figures had the same aspect, but had different relationships between the top two figures. There was a large gap between them for the first graph, however
, when it comes to the second chart, most students
preferred to get a higher degree, closely followed by those who wanted to get a part-time job, both of them were just above 2500. There was also
a group of graduates who could not find a job, with 1625, which was 5 times as many as that in voluntary worksSubmitted by 2575444164 on
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