The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph reveals the
number
of armed robbery
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robberies
assault
and Fix the agreement mistake
assaults
murder
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murders
commited
in London from 2003 to 2012.
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committed
Overall
, weaponized plumbers occured
the most at the start of Correct your spelling
occurred
period
out of 3 Correct article usage
the period
offenses
, but Change the spelling
offences
then
its count dramatically dropped. Attacks , however
,increased over time and number
of numbers remained essentially unchanged.
In 2003 ,the Correct article usage
the number
number
of armed burglaries accounted for just under 3500, which then
reached the graph’s peak at approximately 3700 year
later, steadily declining to Change to a plural noun
years
slighly
over 1000 instances in 2008 and Correct your spelling
slightly
increased
to 1500 , where it remained unchanged for the rest of the period. Turning to strikes, the total Wrong verb form
increasing
number
of attacks recorded in 2003 was 2300 , which ranged under 2500 until 2010 , by 2012 similiar
cases became more frequent and hit its highest of 2800 assaults.
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similar
number
for
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of
were
the same Correct subject-verb agreement
was
in
the beginning and end of the graph despite minor Change preposition
at
variation
. The largest amount of people (900) were killed in 2005,which Fix the agreement mistake
variations
then
fell to around 600 and hovered until 2012, with a minor climb of 700 in 2010.Submitted by zhaniya.azhdarova on
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