The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The provided table and pie charts provide data about the police
budge
between 2017 and 2018. Correct your spelling
budget
While
the table illustrates how the money was spent, the chart shows its distribution. From an overall
perspective, it can be seen that most
expenditure sources Correct article usage
the most
was
the national government that Change the verb form
were
being
used for the salaries of its employees, Change the form of the verb
is
while
the least amount of allocation was spent for other sources (such
as grants) and the lowest usage was for technology.
Examining the first table, in 2017, there were more than 175m poundsterling
used for the country's legislators and it has increased Correct your spelling
pound sterling
at
2.3m in the next year, making it the highest Change preposition
to
bugdet
among others. The second biggest proportion was local taxes Correct your spelling
budget
that
had around 91m in 2017 to 102.3m a year later. Other sources ranked as the smallest number, started with 38m in the first year and only had a million growth by the end of the listed years.
Moving on to the next chart, the majority of the money orientation in both years was for the salary of the officers and staff, being more than a half per cent of the total. The purpose for buildings and transport witnessed on the same level at 17%. Correct pronoun usage
which
However
, there was a sharp growth in technology
sector, Add an article
the technology
that
was almost two-fold from 8 to 14 per cent Correct pronoun usage
which
from
the intervening years.Change preposition
in
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