The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The map illustrates the centre of a small city named Islip in its present
view
and plans for its future view
.
Overall
, they are going to extend the future development with a few features such
as a car park, bus station, and new housing. Additionally
, they are going to add a dual carriageway as well.
According to
the present view
, there is a country situated on the north side. In the middle of the town, there is a main road
and it has access to a school and a park. In addition
, on both sides of the road
they provide two shops.
Based on the future Add a comma
road,
view
, the main change is going to happen on the road
, they are going to design a dual carriageway surrounding the town. Next to this
, the main road
is replaced by pedestrians. On the north side, shops will be destroyed and they are going to create a shopping centre with few facilities such
as parking slots and a bus station going to be provided for people. Meanwhile, two new housing plans will be designed in this
plan.Submitted by shruthiudhai7 on
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