The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The map illustrates the centre of a small city named Islip in its present
view
and plans for its future
view
.
Overall
, they are going to extend the future development with a few features
such
as a car park, bus station, and new housing.
Additionally
, they are going to add a dual carriageway as well.
According to
the present
view
, there is a country situated on the north side. In the middle of the town, there is a main
road
and it has access to a school and a park.
In addition
, on both sides of the
road
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road,
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they provide two shops. Based on the future
view
, the main change is going to happen on the
road
, they are going to design a dual carriageway surrounding the town. Next to
this
, the main
road
is replaced by pedestrians. On the north side, shops will be destroyed and they are going to create a shopping centre with few facilities
such
as parking slots and a bus station going to be provided for people. Meanwhile, two new housing plans will be designed in
this
plan.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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