The line graph gives information about the usage of Facebook and Twitter in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average
usage
on weekly
basis per individual of two social media platforms, Correct article usage
a weekly
Facebook
and Twitter
in Australia from 2012-2016.
Overall
, the average usage
of
per person using Change preposition
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Facebook
rose for few
years, Correct article usage
a few
on the other hand
, the average time of individuals using Twitter
significantly declined for few
years but eventually a massive rise was marked in 2016.
In the initial year of 2012, both online platforms were being used Correct article usage
a few
for
around 20-23 Change preposition
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times
a week
by a single person, however
in 2013, the usage
of Twitter
was recorded around 11 times
a week
, and by the start of year 2014
the trend touched to 10 Add a comma
2014,
times
a week
. A minimal rise of approx 14 times
a week
was accounted in
2015, which was still low in comparison to the time Change preposition
for in
of
per individual in terms of using Change preposition
apply
of
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Facebook
.
Although
, the other platform, Facebook
, saw a steady increase in per person
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per-person
usage
by 5 times
a year, till 2014. From 2014 to 2015 the time being
spent on Unnecessary verb
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Facebook
was slightly changed from 30 to 31 times
by the end of 2015. Despite this
steady growth, Twitter
marked a rapid growth, with users spending 35 times
a week
in 2016.Submitted by patelvaibhav1463 on
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