The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)

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The table compares the daily money spent on drinking

water

per individual in Tanzania, Uganda, Pakistan,

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the UK

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and the USA.

Overall

It is clear that

Tanzania has the most expensive price per

liter

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litre

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water

as well as

fraction

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the fraction

a fraction

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salary

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the salary

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spent on

water

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the water

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contrast

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contrast,

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the USA has the lowest cost and percentage of

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wages

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spent. Among the five different countries, Tanzania is ranked first in terms of daily cost per person, reaching 6.4 cents for 11.5 litres of

water

Furthermore

, Tanzanian people spend

enormous

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5.7% of their salaries on aqua on average.

Secondly

another

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in another

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third-world country, Uganda,

which

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apply

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citizens waste 4.1 cents which is

also

3.2% of their monthly earnings. Pakistan has a

little bit

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slightly

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better situation with only 0.0176 US dollars.

United

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The United

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Kingdom and the United States of America have a lot cheaper and achievable sources of drinkable

water

, with the cost of 1.3 and 0.85 cents per individual respectively;

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