The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)

The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)
The table compares the daily money spent on drinking
water
per individual in Tanzania, Uganda, Pakistan,
UK
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the UK
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and the USA.
Overall
,
It is clear that
Tanzania has the most expensive price per
liter
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litre
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of
water
,
as well as
fraction
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the fraction
a fraction
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of
salary
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the salary
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spent on
water
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the water
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.
By
contrast
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contrast,
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the USA has the lowest cost and percentage of
wage
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wages
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spent. Among the five different countries, Tanzania is ranked first in terms of daily cost per person, reaching 6.4 cents for 11.5 litres of
water
.
Furthermore
, Tanzanian people spend
enormous
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an enormous
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5.7% of their salaries on aqua on average.
Secondly
,
another
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in another
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third-world country, Uganda,
which
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apply
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citizens waste 4.1 cents which is
also
3.2% of their monthly earnings. Pakistan has a
little bit
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slightly
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better situation with only 0.0176 US dollars.
United
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The United
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Kingdom and the United States of America have a lot cheaper and achievable sources of drinkable
water
, with the cost of 1.3 and 0.85 cents per individual respectively;
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • daily cost
  • per person
  • minimum daily requirement
  • litres
  • comparison
  • assessment
  • analysis
  • evaluation
  • impact
  • citizens
  • relationship
  • availability
  • resources
  • measures
  • manage
  • implications
  • health
  • hygiene
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