The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)
The table compares the daily money spent on drinking
water
per individual in Tanzania, Uganda, Pakistan, UK
and the USA.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, It is clear that
Tanzania has the most expensive price per liter
of Change the spelling
litre
water
, as well as
fraction
of Add an article
the fraction
a fraction
salary
spent on Correct article usage
the salary
water
. Add an article
the water
By
contrast
the USA has the lowest cost and percentage of Add a comma
contrast,
wage
spent.
Among the five different countries, Tanzania is ranked first in terms of daily cost per person, reaching 6.4 cents for 11.5 litres of Fix the agreement mistake
wages
water
. Furthermore
, Tanzanian people spend enormous
5.7% of their salaries on aqua on average. Correct article usage
an enormous
Secondly
, another
third-world country, Uganda, Change preposition
in another
which
citizens waste 4.1 cents which is Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
3.2% of their monthly earnings. Pakistan has a little bit
better situation with only 0.0176 US dollars.
Rephrase
slightly
United
Kingdom and the United States of America have a lot cheaper and achievable sources of drinkable Correct article usage
The United
water
, with the cost of 1.3 and 0.85 cents per individual respectively;Submitted by talgattan4ez on
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