The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015.

Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
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The pie
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illustrates the amount of people who owned cars in 2015.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the pie
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is dominated by Greater China and Europe, with 26% and 25% of the
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. Middle East and Africa comprise the smallest portion of the
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, with only 2%. At first glance,
it is clear that
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China and Europe take up over half of the results. The third biggest being North America with 19%.
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, the next group that dominated the pie
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was Japan and Korea, with a percentage of 16%. South Asia took up a small portion of the graph, only half the amount Japan and Korea had.
In addition
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, South America takes up a more compact part of the graph, with only 4%.
Nevertheless
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, the smallest part of the
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is the Middle East and Africa, with a percentage 13 times smaller than that of the biggest which is China.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • car ownership
  • make
  • country
  • comparison
  • distribution
  • vehicle preferences
  • automotive market
  • popular brands
  • market share
  • dominant
  • proportion
  • trend
  • variation
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