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The chart shows the percentage of full-time undergraduate students at universities in three cities by subject area. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the most important features and making comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of full-time undergraduate students at universities in three cities by subject area. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the most important features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of undergraduate
students
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 from five countries who were admitted to three international
universities
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.
Overall
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, the
University
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 of
Riverview
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 attracted more
students
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 as compared to other institutions and a majority of
students
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 came from India and Nepal but Colombia and Indonesia’s scholars showed less interest.
Smithtown
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University
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 was the second favourite destination for Indian and Nepalese
students
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.
Moreover
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, Indian
students
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 studied more in three
universities
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 as compared to others. It is conspicuous that the total of 7500
students
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 from India who were admitted to the
University
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 of
Riverview
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 and
Smithtown
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University
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 was the second highest where 6000 sophomores were admitted and the least choice was Earlwood
University
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 with about 5000
students
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 enrolled. The second-highest undergraduates came from Nepal and they showed more interest in the
University
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 of
Riverview
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 about 5000
students
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 were registered.
Furthermore
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, the
students
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 from Nepal who registered in both
universities
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 were 4000 each. Probing ahead, from Colombia the highest number of
students
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 were taken admission about 1000 and 800 were admitted to Earlwood
University
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 but only 500
students
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 were registered at
Smithtown
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University
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.
Additionally
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, the
University
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 of
Riverview
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 was the second lowest where only 1200
students
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 got registered in the
University
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 of
Riverview
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 and
students
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 remained the same at 1000 each in
Smithtown
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 and Earlwood
Universities
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, universities, university, riverview, smithtown with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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