The line graph shows the number of players in four different sports ( badminton, tennis, basketball, rugby) in a particular European country between 1985 and 2005.

The line graph shows the number of players in four different sports ( badminton, tennis, basketball, rugby) in a particular European country between 1985 and 2005.
The provided line graph depicts the number of individuals who played four different types of sports, namely badminton, tennis, basketball and rugby in a particular European country over five
years
from 1985 to 2005. The units are measured in the numbers. Generally speaking, it is evident that those citizens of Europe who were keen on playing tennis rose drastically, in comparison with others. With regards to rugby, competitors comprised 250, after five
years
it declined slightly to 200, remained steady in 1995, but
nevertheless
to
this
, it faced a downward tendency until 2005.
On the other hand
, tennis players were only 150 in 1985, over the period of 20
years
this
trend reached its highest point in 2005 with nearly 220.
Additionally
, badminton and rugby competitors at first glance plateaued over the period given, badminton players comprised 50 in all provided
years
,
while
basketball competitors were approximately 70 , with a slight improvement in 1995 to nearly 70 and reached the nadir in 2005.
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