The pie charts below show how general household costs were broken down in a certain city in both 2017 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie graphs show the breakdown of general costs for households in a particular city in both 2017 and 2018.
Overall
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while
the costs for rent or house purchasing and schooling decreased over the period, the money spent on entertainment and groceries increased. The exception was household bills, which remained the same.
The Linking Words
cost
of renting or purchasing a house fell significantly from 32% in 2017 to 25% in 2018, Use synonyms
although
it remained the biggest Linking Words
cost
during both years. Use synonyms
Similarly
, there was a decline in the Linking Words
cost
of schooling, which was 22% in 2017 but declined by 4% to 18% a year later. Use synonyms
In contrast
, in 2018 the Linking Words
cost
of entertainment was one and a half times more than it was in 2017, rising from 10% to 15%. Grocery costs Use synonyms
also
saw significant growth from 18% in 2017 to 24% in 2018. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
cost
of household utilities did not decrease and Use synonyms
instead
remained stable at 18% in both yearsLinking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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