Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

There is no doubt, that people have to obtain knowledge,

develope themselve

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develop themselves

, and foster their skills.

However

, the methods could be different; I totally agree with individuals, who suggest

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that

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students

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study

offline with other classmates in educational institutions rather than learning online at

home

.

To begin

with, the process of learning in class with other

students

is more effective than

home

online education.

This

is because the right

autmosphere

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atmosphere

and no disturbing factors,

such

as

kitchen

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the kitchen

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or gadgets,

is

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are

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presented

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at schools. All of that

have

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the

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a

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tremendouse

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tremendous

effect on digesting new materials, which individuals have to consume. Alternatively,

in

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during

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the

pandemic

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pandemic,

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people studied at

home

, which, unfortunately, caused

significant

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decreasing

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of

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in

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students

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student

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results. It is hard to deny, that when an average teenager tries to have classes at

home

, he has to struggle with the desire

of checking

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to check

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social media or

messegers

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messages

.

In addition

, a competition, which exists in all classes, stimulates

students

work

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harder. It explains the fact, that people want to realize

themselve

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themselves

and to occupy a better place in social

hierarhy

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hierarchy

.

In other words

, the performance

at

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in

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a class usually determines

social

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the social

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status of an individual.

For instance

, in the highly effective school, where I studied, the administration created

ranking

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a ranking

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of

students

and everybody

endeovored

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ended

to be

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up being

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an

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excellent.

Conversaly

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Conversely

, online education does not give any chance to compete,

as a result

, children do not

sturve

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starve

strive

to get higher grades. In conclusion, I would stick to my opinion that studying with a group of

students

in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at

home

because It

create

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creates

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correct

conditionals

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conditions

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for

achiving

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achieving

archiving

knowledge.

Moreover

,

the

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apply

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competition among

classmaits

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classmates

is

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also

positevely

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positively

influences on

performance

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the performance

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of

students

.