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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

#group #students #classroom #home #minutes
There is no doubt, that people have to obtain knowledge,
develope themselve
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develop themselves
, and foster their skills.
However
, the methods could be different; I totally agree with individuals, who suggest
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students
studing
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study
 offline with other classmates in educational institutions rather than learning online at
home
.
To begin
 with, the process of learning in class with other
students
 is more effective than
home
 online education.
This
 is because the right
autmosphere
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atmosphere
 and no disturbing factors,
such
 as
kitchen
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 or gadgets,
is
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are
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presented
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 at schools. All of that
have
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the
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a
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tremendouse
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tremendous
 effect on digesting new materials, which individuals have to consume. Alternatively,
in
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 the
pandemic
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 people studied at
home
, which, unfortunately, caused
significant
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a significant
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decreasing
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of
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in
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students
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student
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 results. It is hard to deny, that when an average teenager tries to have classes at
home
, he has to struggle with the desire
of checking
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to check
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 social media or
messegers
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messages
.
In addition
, a competition, which exists in all classes, stimulates
students
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 harder. It explains the fact, that people want to realize
themselve
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themselves
 and to occupy a better place in social
hierarhy
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hierarchy
.
In other words
, the performance
at
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 a class usually determines
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the social
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 status of an individual.
For instance
, in the highly effective school, where I studied, the administration created
ranking
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 of
students
 and everybody
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ended
to be
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up being
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an
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excellent.
Conversaly
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Conversely
, online education does not give any chance to compete,
as a result
, children do not
sturve
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starve
strive
 to get higher grades. In conclusion, I would stick to my opinion that studying with a group of
students
 in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at
home
 because It
create
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creates
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 correct
conditionals
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conditions
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 for
achiving
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achieving
archiving
 knowledge.
Moreover
,
the
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competition among
classmaits
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classmates
is
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also
positevely
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positively
 influences on
performance
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the performance
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 of
students
.
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task achievement
Your task response is good. You have addressed the topic and provided reasons for your opinion. However, the essay would benefit from more detailed and specific examples to strengthen your points. Try to use examples that are more concrete and relatable.
coherence cohesion
While the structure of your essay is clear, there are occasional disruptions in the flow of ideas due to some grammatical and lexical inaccuracies. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Also, make sure words are correctly spelled and used in the right context. Proofreading can help catch these errors.
introduction conclusion present
You have structured your essay well, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
logical structure
Your ideas are generally clear and linked logically from one point to the next.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical interaction
  • Fosters
  • Communication skills
  • Structured environment
  • Discipline
  • Time management
  • Immediate feedback
  • Clarification
  • Motivate
  • Competitive environment
  • Achievement
  • Accommodate
  • Group discussions
  • Experiments
  • Presentations
  • Flexibility
  • Convenience
  • Commitments
  • Remote areas
  • Digital platforms
  • Interactive simulations
  • Social anxiety
  • Participate
  • Engage
  • Diverse learning paces
  • Learning styles
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