The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The following figure provides key information about the
percentage
of people who are living in
Australia
and
Malaysia
during two specific years.The units are measured in
percentage
.
Overall
, it is clear from the table that,the population of both countries witnessed higher growth in 2002.
In addition
, the
percentage
of
male
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the male
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population surprisingly stayed the same in the two years
as well as
the
female
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females
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in the two nations.
According to
what is shown,whilst every age group showed a steady level of growth,there were some primary differences in the actual
percentage
of the annual growth . On the one hand
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Malaysia
surpassed
Australia
with 2.4% and 2.1% respectively.
On the other hand
,
Australia
, show a reasonable rise with 1.2 and 1.3 %. In terms of birth rate, Neither
Australia
nor
Malaysia
recorded any remarkable improvement. It declined from 1.5 %in 1980 to 1.3 %in 2002 in
Australia
. The same happened with
Malaysia
as the rate diminished from 2.4 %to 2.1 %.
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