The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The following figure provides key information about the
percentage
of people who are living in Australia
and Malaysia
during two specific years.The units are measured in percentage
.
Overall
, it is clear from the table that,the population of both countries witnessed higher growth in 2002.In addition
, the percentage
of male
population surprisingly stayed the same in the two years Correct article usage
the male
as well as
the female
in the two nations.
Fix the agreement mistake
females
According to
what is shown,whilst every age group showed a steady level of growth,there were some primary differences in the actual percentage
of the annual growth . On the one handAdd a comma
,
Malaysia
surpassed Australia
with 2.4% and 2.1% respectively.On the other hand
, Australia
, show a reasonable rise with 1.2 and 1.3 %.
In terms of birth rate, Neither Australia
nor Malaysia
recorded any remarkable improvement. It declined from 1.5 %in 1980 to 1.3 %in 2002 in Australia
. The same happened with Malaysia
as the rate diminished from 2.4 %to 2.1 %.Submitted by the.majesty2011 on
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