The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and bar chart illustrate how many male and female
students
enrolled in different
disciplines
at a particular university in 2012.
Overall
, social
science
was the most popular discipline amongst both male and female
students
,
while
agriculture was the least.
Additionally
,
while
females dominated the social sciences, health, and humanities
disciplines
, males were more commonly found in engineering,
and
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science
and maths
disciplines
. As for the total enrollment figures, social sciences attracted the highest number of
students
, with almost 7000 in total.
This
was more than double the figure for engineering enrollments,
while
a close similarity was observed in the figures for health, humanities,
and
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science
and maths, all standing at around 2000
students
. Meanwhile, agriculture was the discipline with the lowest enrolment levels, with approximately 500
students
. Turning to gender distribution, 4000 female
students
opted for social sciences, outnumbering males by just over 1,000. Health and humanities followed a similar pattern, with roughly 1500 females and under 1000 males studying both
disciplines
.
Conversely
, engineering,
and
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science
and maths were
male dominated
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, with just above 2000 and 1000 male
students
enrolling in these
disciplines
, compared to approximately 1000 and 500 females, respectively. Agriculture was the only discipline where an equal number of male and female
students
were enrolled, at about 200 each.
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