The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and bar chart illustrate how many male and female
students
enrolled in different disciplines
at a particular university in 2012.
Overall
, social science
was the most popular discipline amongst both male and female students
, while
agriculture was the least. Additionally
, while
females dominated the social sciences, health, and humanities disciplines
, males were more commonly found in engineering, and
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science
and maths disciplines
.
As for the total enrollment figures, social sciences attracted the highest number of students
, with almost 7000 in total. This
was more than double the figure for engineering enrollments, while
a close similarity was observed in the figures for health, humanities, and
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science
and maths, all standing at around 2000 students
. Meanwhile, agriculture was the discipline with the lowest enrolment levels, with approximately 500 students
.
Turning to gender distribution, 4000 female students
opted for social sciences, outnumbering males by just over 1,000. Health and humanities followed a similar pattern, with roughly 1500 females and under 1000 males studying both disciplines
. Conversely
, engineering, and
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science
and maths were male dominated
, with just above 2000 and 1000 male Add a hyphen
male-dominated
students
enrolling in these disciplines
, compared to approximately 1000 and 500 females, respectively. Agriculture was the only discipline where an equal number of male and female students
were enrolled, at about 200 each.Submitted by vinu052t on
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