The graph below shows the percentage of people in the different age group who went to the cinema once a month in Great Britain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of folk in different age categories who visited the cinema once a month in the UK between 1984
to
2000.
Correct word choice
and
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that every age group increased in percentage over the period. Additionally
, teenagers were the most visitable , while
ageing people had a little
ratio.
In 1984, people ages 15-24 were in first place at just under 20% and it slightly grew Correct word choice
small
up
in number for the next ten years and took exactly 40%. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, it rose moderately in the year
1999 and reached approximately 55% and continued slowly
Fix the infinitive
to slowly
surged
and Wrong verb form
surge
got
the peak point at about 60% in the Verb problem
reached
year
2000. Just like that, the age group 7-14 started at exactly one-tenth and uplifted gradually to around 40% in 1999, but it fell steadily and took just about 30% at the end
of the period.
The adults at ages 25-35 also
moved upward in cent and in 1989 took roughly 10% and it climbed progressively in the year
1994 and acquired 25% and was steady at this
point to the year
1999 and it again started going up and achieved his maximum point at exactly like the ages 7-14 in the year
2000. People that have 35 and over was in zero per cent at the beginning and it mildly obscured to 5% in 1994 and sequentially soared to a little more than 15% in the year
2000.Submitted by Kawasaki on
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