WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
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The table presents data on the
number
of local and international research
students
enrolled in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. The data shows a significant increase in the total number
of research
students
over this
period, with a notable rise in the number
of international students
.
In 2001, there were 38,849 research
students
in total, comprising 33,657 local students
and 5,192 international students
. By 2010, the total number
of research
students
had grown to 54,081, with local students
increasing to 39,488 and international students
showing a substantial rise to 14,593.
The most striking change is the increase in international research
students
, which nearly tripled from 2001 to 2010. Although
the number
of local students
also
increased, the growth rate was less pronounced compared to that of international students
.
In summary, the data indicates that while
the number
of local research
students
in Australian universities increased modestly between 2001 and 2010, the number
of international research
students
saw a much more significant rise, leading to a larger and more diverse research
student population by 2010.Submitted by sarahfahadliv on
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