The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. 

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the proportion
population
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between 2011 to 2012 in New Zealand among different
age
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groups
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the diagram the all-ages
population
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enlarged in these years. The most expanded
population
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of senior people as compared to others and only teenagers decreased in numbers. It is conspicuous that there was an increase of 0.6% in
population
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in 2012 of all
age
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groups
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. The
age
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group
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of 15-39 was higher at 1.577.256 and the second
group
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40-64 years old which was 1.331.907 in 2011. The lowest 65+,
group
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had 573.946 in 2011 and the lowest children's
group
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under 15 was 898.160 in the same year. Probing ahead, the people of the 65+
age
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group
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showed an increment of +4.0% in 2012, that
group
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had a
population
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of 596.903.
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, the
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of all ages and 40-64 years
groups
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had a +0.6% increment, those were 4381.269 and 1.331.907 respectively in 2012. Both
groups
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of under 15 and 15-39 declined to -0.2% each in 2012. The under-15
age
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group
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had 896.364 and the
age
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group
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of 15-39 had 1574.102 people respectively in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, age, groups, group with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • age group
  • increase
  • decline
  • elderly population
  • aging population
  • working-age population
  • stable labor force
  • modest increase
  • significant change
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