The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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information on the typical

temperature

in a month and the amount of money spent on swimwear for the first half of 2012 in New York.

Overall

, it can be seen that there was a remarkable increase in

temperature

from January to June, and the interest in purchasing beachwear generally fluctuated. The average

temperature

in February was a little colder than in the first month of the year by a

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degrees,

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it started to get warmer

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March with the

temperature

being about 40 degrees Fahrenheit and it soared and peaked in Jun

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around 60 degrees. The amount of bathing suits sold had an

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trend from January, when the sales were approximately 10 million US$ and culminated in April, the figure was almost three times the money spent on swimming costumes in the first month of the year. In May the number has grammatically plummeted and hit the lowest point in June, when only a little more than 300.000$ were disposed.