The pie chart shows the factors that negatively affect the development of agricultural land around the world,while the table illustrates the process of land degradation in the three main regions of these factors.

The pie chart shows the factors that negatively affect the development of agricultural land around the world,while the 

table illustrates the process of land degradation in the three main regions of these factors.
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The pie chart compares four different factors that have a bad impact on agriculture infrastructure worldwide, and the table demonstrates the causes of
land
worsening in the top three ranked continents.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the main problem that causes the degradation of the soil is by far over-grazing. We can
also
see that Europe has the most total amount of degraded
land
caused by three main factors.
According to
the pie chart, deforestation caused more soil degradation than over-cultivation by two
percent
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.
Moreover
, the over-cultivating of the
land
was the least factor that caused bad lands;
accordingly
, over-grazing was at the top of the list with an enormous 35%. Looking at the region-related table, Europe’s
land
degradation was spread all around three factors, having only a difference of 4% each.
Furthermore
, Europe had the most amount of total
land
degraded, reaching a solid 23%.
Whereas
, Oceania's main problem was over-grazing of the
land
with 11.3% and a little deforestation, combined it has 13% of
degraded
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population. In comparison, North America had only 5% in total.
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