The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The flow diagram illustrates the process of

sugar

production from

sugar

cane. We can see that

sugar

is made using a raw material that grows for over a year, and the manufacturing process

consist

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consists

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of seven distinct stages.

Furthermore

harvesting stage can be taken in two different ways, by machine and by hand.

At the first stage

in the production of

sugar

,

sugar

canes are sowed into the soil and left growing for a period of 12-18 months.

Next,

the plant is harvested manually, or with the assistance of technologies.

Then

, the

sugar

cane

is passing

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passes

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through

crashing

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the crashing

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machine, producing

an

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a

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juice

at the end

. After that, juices

is

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are

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purifying

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purified

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by going through

limestone

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a limestone

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filter. The following stage begins with the heating

the

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of the

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evaporator, in which, the purifyed juice is later poured. The sixth

steps

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step

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involes

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involves

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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, spinning at a high speed

it

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which

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separates crystals from

syrup

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the syrup

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.

Finally

, the syrup is

the

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apply

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dryed

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dried

in a

low temperature

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low-temperature

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container, and the

sugar

is produced.