Compare between the educational system of Australia and Palestine

In today's world, providing

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great educational system is a privilege for every country and

both

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Palestine

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and

Australia

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are working to improve their educational system. Despite the similarities between

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systems

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the differences are

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noticeable in fees,

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and language. In

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I will discuss each point for

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countries

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.

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, When it comes to public

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school

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both

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Palestine

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and

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are providing

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free education for

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students

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. As they care more about having a

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citizen,

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countries

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are giving their nation the facility of studying the

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stage for free.

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, in

univeristies

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universities

students

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have to pay if they want to study either in

Palestine

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or in

Ausrtalia

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Australia

, but there is a gap between the two

countries

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in the university fees, as in

Palestine

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you will pay much less than in

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, studying dentistry in

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will cost

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domestic student 37

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thousand

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while

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in

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studying dentistry will cost the student 20

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thousand

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,the big

distrebution

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distribution

of schools inside the country makes a

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parallel

between

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and

Palestine

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.On the one hand,

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Australia

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and

Palestine

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are trying to make

eduction

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accessable

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accessible

for

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the

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, and for

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they are making

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school

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nearly in every

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suburb

of the country.

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, reaching

school

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for the

students

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of

Palestine

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is not as easy as

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of

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multiple

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that the Palestinian face

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like security checks or wars, sometimes it's hard for the

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to go to their

school

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.

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,

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is one of the shared subjects that

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countries

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have

it

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in their

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. People

in

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these days are using

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for trading and work, so it

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for

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Palestine

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and

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to teach their

students

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how to use it

proparly

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properly

. Unlike

Australia

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,

Palestine

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does not use

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for other subjects like math, science and Physics which makes it harder for the

students

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when they start studying at the university to adapt

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the idea of having their

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slides

written in

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, and in

fact

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this

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may affect their GPA. In conclusion,

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Palestinian and Australian educational systems have their advantages and drawbacks.

While

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is good when it comes to the cost of university,

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is better in

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students

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accessability

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access

to schools and using

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for all the subjects. The process of developing the educational system will never stop and

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countries

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gradute

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graduate

great

students

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.