The maps elow show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data
The following maps illustrate the current layout of Islip
town
centre and propose a development plan for the future.
Overall
, it is clear that
the main road
is to be replaced by a pedestrian path, and a circular road
is to be constructed that will surround the entire town
centre.
To the north side of the town
, currently, there are a series of small shops facing the main road
from west to east and an empty countryside. They both are planned to be replaced by a bus station, a shopping centre, a car park, and a housing society which is also
connected to the ring road
through a smaller road
.
Looking at the southern part, there are no plans to replace these commercial units, however
, the size of the park is expected to shrink, and to its left, a new housing project is planned. Most importantly, the entire town
is engulfed by a circular road
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