The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the average daily revenue of various selected food items by season at the Brisk Café.
Overall
, the five food items are hot Linking Words
coffee
, iced Use synonyms
coffee
, ice cream, soup, and salad, which are basic Use synonyms
dishes
and drinks in every Use synonyms
coffee
shop. Discernibly, Use synonyms
coffee
, regardless Use synonyms
whether
it is hot or cold, is served the most to consumers.
In winter, hot Change preposition
of whether
coffee
is the most common choice for people, which is served around 75 cups per Use synonyms
day
. The number of servings of soup, a hot dish, accounts for the second place with around 50 Use synonyms
dishes
per Use synonyms
day
. Ice cream and salad are bought Use synonyms
similarly
, around 25 portions in a Linking Words
day
. Use synonyms
And only
a mere 2 iced Correct word choice
Only
coffee
servings are served per Use synonyms
day
.
In summer, it is notable that cold Use synonyms
dishes
like iced Use synonyms
coffee
and ice cream are served the most in a Use synonyms
day
, which are 40 and 35 portions. Other Use synonyms
dishes
are served less.Use synonyms
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