The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the average daily revenue of various selected food items by season at the Brisk Café.
Overall
, the five food items are hot coffee
, iced coffee
, ice cream, soup, and salad, which are basic dishes
and drinks in every coffee
shop. Discernibly, coffee
, regardless whether
it is hot or cold, is served the most to consumers.
In winter, hot Change preposition
of whether
coffee
is the most common choice for people, which is served around 75 cups per day
. The number of servings of soup, a hot dish, accounts for the second place with around 50 dishes
per day
. Ice cream and salad are bought similarly
, around 25 portions in a day
. And only
a mere 2 iced Correct word choice
Only
coffee
servings are served per day
.
In summer, it is notable that cold dishes
like iced coffee
and ice cream are served the most in a day
, which are 40 and 35 portions. Other dishes
are served less.Submitted by debora.scott on
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