The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the average daily revenue of various selected food items by season at the Brisk Café.
Overall
, the five food items are hot
coffee
, iced
coffee
, ice cream, soup, and salad, which are basic
dishes
and drinks in every
coffee
shop. Discernibly,
coffee
, regardless
whether
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of whether
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it is hot or cold, is served the most to consumers. In winter, hot
coffee
is the most common choice for people, which is served around 75 cups per
day
. The number of servings of soup, a hot dish, accounts for the second place with around 50
dishes
per
day
. Ice cream and salad are bought
similarly
, around 25 portions in a
day
.
And only
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Only
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a mere 2 iced
coffee
servings are served per
day
. In summer, it is notable that cold
dishes
like iced
coffee
and ice cream are served the most in a
day
, which are 40 and 35 portions. Other
dishes
are served less.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, dishes, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average daily sales
  • Selected food items
  • Seasonal variation
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Comparison
  • Preferences
  • Anomalies
  • Promotions
  • Stock adjustment
  • Seasonal influence
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