The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The map

illustrate

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illustrates

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the current and future planned blueprints of

office

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an office

the office

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building.

Overall

, the

work place

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workplace

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will be transformed into a modern and more entertainment

areas

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area

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for the staff. Looking at the two unused landscapes,

at

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on

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the left side of the map, it will soon become an outdoor activity area for the worker to take a fresh air.

On the

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The

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right side will turned into a meeting space

at the end

of the corner

while

the

upfront

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front

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will be

putting

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apply

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a coffee machine to drink. Regarding the entrance and reception, it will be placed at a new location between the offices. As we can see, the kitchen and canteen will be replaced owing to expand the size of the office

whereas

the stock room will

be remained

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remain

have remained

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the same.