The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1975 to 2025.

The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1975 to 2025.
The bar graph shows the changes in the
rates
of
birth
and
death
in Switzerland between 1975 and 2025.
Overall
, the
birth
rates
will
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are
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expected to increase,
however
, the amount of
death
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deaths
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will show reverse
result
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results
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following years.
Moreover
, there was a significant rise in the number of
birth
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births
show examples
.
Initially
, the point of
birth
and
death
were just above
at
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apply
show examples
1 and just under
at
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1 million. After a decade,
thiese
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these
tendancies changed
the
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their
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role with themselves.
Following
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years, in 1995,
birth
rates
rose to 1,5
millons
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million
,
besides
that, the number of
death
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deaths
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reached
to
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apply
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around 1.3 mln. In 2015, the quantity of
birth
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births
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doubled and it was predicted to grow next years.
In contrast
, the number of
death
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deaths
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consisted of
one third
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one-third
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of
birth
rates
in 2015. Afterwards, by 2025 there was a slight decline in the
rates
of
death
.
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