The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.
The
chart
illustrates the number
of people in higher levels of education
categorized by gender in three time periods. In addition
to that, the chart
also
shows how many of these students are studying full time
and how many opted for part-time Add a hyphen
full-time
education
.
A close look at the chart
reveal
that among both men and Change the verb form
reveals
women
part-time Add a comma
women,
education
had
seen a growth in popularity. Only about a hundred thousand men were fully devoted to their studies in the 1970 semester. In 1990, Wrong verb form
has
however
, we can see that more the double of
that amount were studying full time. Change preposition
apply
Similarly
, we can notice this
trend between women
as well.
On the other hand
, the number
of men engaged in studying part-time peaked in 1970 with close to a million people. This
number
had decreased by about a tenth because
which is in stark contrast Correct word choice
apply
from
the Change preposition
to
number
of women
are
participating in half-time Unnecessary verb
apply
further
education
. From the chart
, it can be inferred that the opposite pattern is true for women
and a notable increase is shown form
a mere seven thousand people in 1970 to more than a million in just twenty years. Because of that, we can predict that Correct your spelling
from
this
number
have
only grown.Change the verb form
has
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