The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.

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illustrates the

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of people in higher levels of

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categorized by gender in three time periods.

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to that, the

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also

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shows how many of these students are studying

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and how many opted for part-time

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. A close look at the

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reveal

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that among both men and

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women

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part-time

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seen a growth in popularity. Only about a hundred thousand men were fully devoted to their studies in the 1970 semester. In 1990,

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, we can see that more the double

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that amount were studying full time.

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, we can notice

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trend between

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as well.

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, the

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of men engaged in studying part-time peaked in 1970 with close to a million people.

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had decreased by about a tenth

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which is in stark contrast

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the

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of

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are

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participating in half-time

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. From the

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, it can be inferred that the opposite pattern is true for

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and a notable increase is shown

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a mere seven thousand people in 1970 to more than a million in just twenty years. Because of that, we can predict that

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number

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have

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only grown.