You are renting a flight from agency. Your contract was 1 year but you need to leave the flat 2 months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter, •introduce yourself •ask to leave the flat before contract finishes •explain why you need to break the contract

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to explain why I'

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leaving

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the

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flat. I have to go away

with

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for

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some

reasons

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reason

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. I'

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a businessman and I need a flat, not least because I often move to work at different places for my business.

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, I'

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renting your flight. Actually, my contract was for one year

however

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, I

have

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to leave the flat 2 months ago. That's why, I'

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writing to ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes. If you

agree

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agree on

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this

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I really would be

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apply

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grateful

from

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you.

Last

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year I started a big business. I go away

numerous

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to numerous

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places through it. I will have been in

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country for 8 months. I'

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renting your flat for one year but I have to go

another

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to another

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country.

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, I will leave the flat 2 months early. I really don't want to leave it but my business requires that. I hope you will understand my situation. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Peter.

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style

Try to use more varied sentence structures to enhance readability. Avoid repetitive sentences and phrases, especially when explaining your situation.

clarification

Provide a clear and concise reason for breaking the contract earlier in your letter. Although you explained the situation, the reasoning could be more directly linked to the need to move for business purposes.

tone

Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for the context. These contribute positively to the overall tone of your writing.

task completion

Your letter has adequately addressed all parts of the task, asking to leave the flat early and providing a reason for this necessity.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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