The bar chart gives data about the percentage of individuals who ate specific potrion of herbals on a single day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

The bar chart gives data about the percentage of individuals who ate specific potrion of herbals on a single day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
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The bar graph illustrates the distribution of a specific portion of herbals that were eaten by people (children, men, and
women
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every single day in the UK over a
period
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of eight years from 2001 to 2008.
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, it can be clearly seen that the highest percentage of herbal consumers was
women
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over the
period
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,
while
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children became the lowest number through a given
period
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. At the beginning of the
period
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, the figure for
women
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who ate herbals stood at well above 20 and increased slightly to almost a quarter in the following year. From
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point onwards, the
women
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's rate experienced regular growth and reached a peak at exactly 35 in 2006, before dropping to around 30
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of the
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.
Similarly
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, the number of children and men showed the same pattern which always comprised around 13 and 17, respectively and remained stable from 2001 to 2003.
Thereafter
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, both figures showed an upward trend and peaked at almost one-third in 2007.
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, the proportion of these figures declined steadily to about 25 in 2007.
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