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The pie chart shows the percentage of carbon dioxide (CO2) emitted by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while the bar graph shows the top 6 emitters per capita in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of carbon dioxide (CO2) emitted by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while the bar graph shows the top 6 emitters per capita in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart shows the percent of carbon dioxide emitted by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015
while
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 the bar graph shows the carbon dioxide
emissions
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 per person in the same year. The most
emissions
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 being made by China and the United States Addressing the two biggest polluters in the chart, we can see that China is at the top with 31% of the total
emissions
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whereas
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 America follows the lead with 17% of the total
emissions
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. The other countries on the list are all below 10%
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 Germany had the lowest
emissions
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 at 2%. The bar graph shows the number of carbon dioxide
emissions
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 per person. The leader of
this
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 list is Saudi Arabia at 16 units followed by America, Australia and Canada which are all near 15 units. The country with the least amount of
emissions
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 per person is Russia, which is only at 10 units. In conclusion, the
Unites
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United
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 States is one of the biggest polluters in the world as per the information in the given pie chart and bar graph respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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