The table shows the percentage of people with mobile phones who use various features on their phone between 2006 and 2010. •Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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features

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features

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most

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used in all

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that

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shown in

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. The feature of making calls is

most

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used in 3

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,

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while

playing music is the least used in

this

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sending and receiving text messages are in second place

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getting used,

besides

people

are prefer

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to take photos rather than

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games. In accordance with

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, people are making calls more than using other

features

and

in

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this

years

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the

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are

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almost 100%.

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, people are texting with

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more than taking photos and

thats

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why the

percentage

in 3

years

are 73%, 75% and 79%,

meanwhile

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percentage

of taking photos

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66%, 71% and 76%.

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, there

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last

feature

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that

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used less than others and the feature of searching

in

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the internet are most used

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4

features

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first did not

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any data,

then

41% and 73%.

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goes playing video games which

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was 17%, 42% and 41%.

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least two

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playing music and recording video and their

percentage

is 12%, 18% and 26% and no

percentage

, 9% and 35%.