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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table describes the information about
potato
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 consumption and production in different parts of the world in 2006.
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potato
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 intake in Europe was the highest
while
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Asia
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 and Europe were the major
potato
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 producers in 2006. It is obvious that an average European ate slightly over 96 kilograms which was higher than the
potato
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 intake in other parts of the world. With roughly 58
kg
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potato
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 consumption per person, North America stood at the second top position.
Asia
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, consider about 26
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 per person
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 intake. South and Central American citizens ate more than 23
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 per human, the least
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 consumption could be observed in Africa, over 14
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 per African. Asian countries produced over 131 million tonnes
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potato
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 in 2006 which was higher than the
potato
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 growth in Africa and America. Europe’s
potato
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 harvesting was the second largest, roughly 5 million tonnes less than that of
Asia
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. It is worth noticing that
Asia
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 and Europe were the principal
potato
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 growers in 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, asia, kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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