In many large cities, people have to spend hours driving in heavy traffic every day. What are the effects of this on society and the individual? What can be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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These days
people
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tend to live and work in
giantic
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gigantic

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cities
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due to
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more job opportunities and other
fecilities
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facilities

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like
high level
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universites
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and
this
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result
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in most populated towns and
also
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more
traffic
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. It is obvious every day
people
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come across
to
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apply

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havy
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heavy
have

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traffic
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when they
comutte
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commute

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to work or shopping. Getting trapped in
traffic
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can make
people
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angry and
trake
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take
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their
time
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,
moreover
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society
is
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may get bad impacts
such
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as
air
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polution
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pollution

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and
congestted
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congested

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unequlaly
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unequally

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. I will give some
solution
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to tackle these
issue
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in
this
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essay. One of the drawbacks of
the
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apply

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being in
the
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hardly moving
traffic
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is health
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problem
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problems

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which
is
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are

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common in huge
cities
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like being angry and mad as a mental
problem
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. Spending
time
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in
such
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an atmospher
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of
cars horn
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sound
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affect
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on
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an

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individual's mind,
furtheremore
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air
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polution
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can increase loungh cancers. It is obvious that
time
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is regarded as the
worthest
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worthiest
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wealth to
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as well as
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healthy.
Although
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people
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spend
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a noticible
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noticeable

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part of their days in
traffic
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and
this
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take
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takes

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their
time
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and
also
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they have to wake up so early in the morning to could get
their
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work place
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workplace

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and get back too late at
the
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apply

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night because of
traffic
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,
this
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can distribute their sleeping
time
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effecting on their health. Regarding problems which society
face
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faces

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to
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, heavy
traffice
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traffic

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means more working
car
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cars

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at the same
time
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and place adding more chemical ingredients into
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air
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without giving
time
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to distribute or purify it
make
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making

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air
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the air

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too
hazardeous
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to breathe.
However
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, the
rason
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reason

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why
metropoliten
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metropolitan

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cities
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sufferring from mispopulatting areas is that individuals choose city
center
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centers

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where
gathered
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more offices and institutes
due to
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save commute
time
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and avoid getting trapped in
such
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traffics so
this
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add
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adds

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to
former
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the former

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issue in
turne
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turn

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.
Moreover
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,
high
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the high

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price of renting and
buing
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buying

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houses and accommodation in the
center
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centre

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of big
cities
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is the consequence of demanding these
neighberhood
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neighbourhoods

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more than
other area
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another area
other areas

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like
suburbes
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suburbs
suburban

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. Every
problem
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has some solution and in
this
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case
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case,

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I think
this
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go
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goes

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down more to governments than
people
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by
regullating
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regulating

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some simple laws
such
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as charging more
to
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for

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cars entering
to
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apply

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congested streets
this
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motivate
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motivates

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people
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to park outside of
there
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their

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for not paying more money for it.
Government
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The government

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must find
roots
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the roots

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of these issues to cope with
it
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them

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.
For example
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,
lacking
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there is a lack

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in
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of

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the
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a

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public transportation system and the easiest way to resolve it is
improving
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and
adding
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add

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more public transportation means like
bus
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buses

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and trains and the like. In conclusion,
slow moving
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slow-moving

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traffic
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is
the
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apply

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on
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one

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of the big
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

cities
Change noun form
cities'
city's

It seems that this noun form may be incorrect.

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Use synonyms
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems

It seems that problem may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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and it may
put
Verb problem
have

There may be a verb use issue here.

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bad impacts
of
Change preposition
on

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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citizens like health
Use synonyms
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems

It seems that problem may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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and wasting
time
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, and even
such
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

effects on society like
polutions
Correct your spelling
pollutions
pollution

If you don’t want polutions to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

and
populatting
Correct your spelling
pollution

If you don’t want populatting to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

not
equaly
Correct your spelling
equally

If you don’t want equaly to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

in areas.
However
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
Correct article usage
the covernment
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covernment
Correct your spelling
government
governments

If you don’t want covernment to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

can deal with
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

by
regullating
Correct your spelling
regulating

If you don’t want regullating to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

and adding some
equipments
Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment

It appears that equipments is an uncountable noun and should not be made plural. Consider changing the noun.

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task response
Your essay demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and presents relevant points. However, you should strive to provide more detailed reasoning and examples to strengthen your arguments.
coherence cohesion
The overall structure of the essay is clear, and the paragraphs are organized logically. However, some transitions between ideas and paragraphs could be smoother to further enhance the flow of the essay.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving your language accuracy, particularly in terms of spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Small errors can accumulate and affect the clarity of your writing. Consider reviewing the correct spelling of words and usage of tenses.
task response
You have effectively addressed the issues of heavy traffic and its impacts on both individuals and society. Your inclusion of potential solutions demonstrates critical thinking.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps to frame your discussion effectively.
coherence cohesion
Despite some grammatical errors, your essay remains understandable and maintains a focus on the topic throughout. This demonstrates your ability to stay on track with your main points.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • congestion
  • cardiovascular diseases
  • idling vehicles
  • greenhouse gases
  • urban sprawl
  • road rage
  • leisure activities
  • economic consequences
  • productivity
  • public transportation
  • emissions
  • quality of life
  • fuel consumption
  • environmental damage
  • stress and anxiety
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