the charts give information about two genres of TV programes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
The bar chart shows the number of 35-44 old
people
who watched TV programmes by male and female and four different age groups in Australia.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that more women than men watch reality shows, while
the proportion of male and female audiences prefering
game shows is almost similar. Correct your spelling
preferring
Additionally
, the proportion of peopleage
45+ enjoying reality and game shows is the biggest among other groups.
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people age
people
To begin
with ,a large majority of women almost 70% watch reality shows, while
this
TV program
is also
enjoyed by 38% of men. In terms of age group, a significant proportion of people
aged 45+ and 35-44 watch this
program
around 70% and 68%.This
program
is also
watched by 60% of audiences aged 25-34 years old. However
,other age groups not
really interested in Add a missing verb
are not
this
show.The number of people
16-24 approximately
52%.
In the second Add a missing verb
is approximately
chart
the audience of women and men are almost similar around Add a comma
chart,
50%and
51%. Correct your spelling
50 and
Furthermore
, the audience of this
program
are
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is
popular belong
45 years old, followed by young Verb problem
mostly
people
16-24 years old around 50%.With 40%Change preposition
of
people
categorises also
enjoying with
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apply
this
programme.By contrast
,young people
25-34years
old have less interest.Correct your spelling
25-34 years
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