The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these cause affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart illustrates data on the proportion of international
land
degradation from 4 different causes, while
the table displays the
information about the percentages of Correct article usage
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land
in three countries degraded by three causes in 1990.
Overall
, over-grazing held at
the top number one worldwide Change preposition
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issues
compared to others and it had Fix the agreement mistake
issue
a
significant damage to the Remove the article
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land
, especially in Oceania. However
, the most affected region led by Europe with the highest digit.
Looking at the pie chart, over-grazing stood at the highest with 35%. Deforestation fell a close second,
30%. Over cultivation placed third place, accounting for slight
more than a quarter. As for the other category, it had less than one in ten.
Regarding Change the adjective
slightly
damage
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the damage
of
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three
regions, Europe had the highest Correct article usage
the three
of
total Change preposition
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land
degraded with 23%, mainly due to
deforestation, 9.8%. Oceania fell a close second with a sum of 13%. However
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of over-cultivation Change the spelling
per cent
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accounted for 11.3% of over-grazing. North America had the lowest entire share of 5%.Correct word choice
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