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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of
waste
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 produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.It is evident
company
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C
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as
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has
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 produced more
waste
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especially
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 around the year 2015.
Overall
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,
Company
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 A
has
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generated more
waste
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inintally
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initially
 in the year 2000 and tends to gradually decline production of
waste
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 from 12 to 9 respectively.
Moreover
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,
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company
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Company
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C
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 had a slower production of debris
initally
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initially
 and
have
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 skyrocketed greatly from 5 to 10 .
Furthermore
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,
company
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 B has an aggregate disposal of 8 and retained minimum growth from the period 2000 to 2005.
On the other hand
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,
company
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C
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 and
company
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 B were at a consistent growth. In conclusion,
company
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 A tends to produce maximum litter
whereas
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, both companies B and
C
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produced
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produce
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 minimum
however
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,
the a
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the
a
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 rapid decline
of
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in
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the
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apply
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waste
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 production could be seen for
company
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 A from 2010 and eventually stabilizes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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