the chart below shows the amount of money per week spen on fast foods in Baritain. the graphshows the trends in consumption of fast foos. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

the chart below shows the amount of money per week spen on fast foods in Baritain. the graphshows the trends in consumption of fast foos.

write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The bar chart and the line graph illustrate the consumption of junk
food
depending on
income
categories in two decades starting from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
, the most consumed fast
food
and the one that had a rapid increase is
hamburger
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hamburgers
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espicially
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especially
among
high
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high-income
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income
individuals, followed by
pizza
. Meanwhile,
fish
and
chips
had a gradual decline in its sales. It was noticed that
hambuger
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hamburgers
is the most purchased fast
food
in both high and
average
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average-income
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income
households. In the beginning of 1970, it reached just under 100
grammes
.
In
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the end of that decade,
spesfically
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specifically
, in 1980 it rose to approximately 170.
Moreover
, the
peack
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peak
pack
that
hamburger
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hamburgers
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reached
is
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was
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about 550
grammes
in 1990. Despite the fact that
fish
and
chips
had a dramatic fall, interestingly, it is the most consumed fast
food
by
low
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low-income
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income
families. In 1970, it was
cosumed
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consumed
more than
pizza
as it was just above 300,
while
pizza
was about 30
grammes
.
Half way
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Halfway
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through the time period,
pizza
start
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started
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to have a rapid increase as it reached approximately 120
grammes
in 1980, and
fish
and
chips
had a decrease to
be
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apply
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about 200
grammes
. surprisingly,
in
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at
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the end of the period
pizza
supassed
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surpassed
fish
and
chips
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, income, pizza, fish, chips, grammes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.

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