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the chart below shows the amount of money per week spen on fast foods in Baritain. the graphshows the trends in consumption of fast foos. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

the chart below shows the amount of money per week spen on fast foods in Baritain. the graphshows the trends in consumption of fast foos. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
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The bar chart and the line graph illustrate the consumption of junk
food
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 depending on
income
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 categories in two decades starting from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
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, the most consumed fast
food
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 and the one that had a rapid increase is
hamburger
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hamburgers
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espicially
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especially
 among
high
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high-income
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income
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 individuals, followed by
pizza
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. Meanwhile,
fish
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 and
chips
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 had a gradual decline in its sales. It was noticed that
hambuger
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hamburgers
 is the most purchased fast
food
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 in both high and
average
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average-income
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income
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 households. In the beginning of 1970, it reached just under 100
grammes
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.
In
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At
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 the end of that decade,
spesfically
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specifically
, in 1980 it rose to approximately 170.
Moreover
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, the
peack
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peak
pack
 that
hamburger
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hamburgers
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 reached
is
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was
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 about 550
grammes
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 in 1990. Despite the fact that
fish
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 and
chips
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 had a dramatic fall, interestingly, it is the most consumed fast
food
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 by
low
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low-income
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income
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 families. In 1970, it was
cosumed
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consumed
 more than
pizza
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 as it was just above 300,
while
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pizza
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 was about 30
grammes
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.
Half way
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Halfway
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 through the time period,
pizza
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start
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started
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 to have a rapid increase as it reached approximately 120
grammes
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 in 1980, and
fish
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 and
chips
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 had a decrease to
be
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apply
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about 200
grammes
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. surprisingly,
in
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at
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 the end of the period
pizza
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supassed
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surpassed
fish
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 and
chips
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, income, pizza, fish, chips, grammes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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