The graph shows changes in the proportion of Internet users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart compares the percentage of the population using the
Internet
in three various areas over a 10-year period.
Overall
, it is clear that
the proportion
of Internet
users
in all three countries increased steadily throughout the given period. Moreover
, the percentage of people using the Internet
was outstanding by far in Canada
in
the same time, reaching 100% in the end.
Change preposition
at
To begin
, we can notice that in 1999, the proportion
of internet
users
in Mexico was just around 5%, and in Canada
, it was about 10%, whereas
the USA users
showed approximately 25%. The proportion
of citizens in Mexico rose slightly to around 20% in 2003, while
the USA illustrated a steady increase to around 50%, meanwhile, the ratio of Internet
users
in Canada
increased dramatically to over 50 %, which reached a high point.
From 2003 to 2009, we can see that the proportion
of people who used the Internet
rose moderately to roughly 40% in Mexico and to around 80% in the USA. Meanwhile, all citizens started to utilize the Internet
in 2009 in Canada
, which also
experienced the highest point all
.
.Correct determiner usage
apply
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