Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People learn things better from those at their own level—such as fellow students or co-workers—than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is an irrefutable fact that every learner

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their own way of learning. Some people

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that students can get better knowledge from teachers.

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, I do not agree with

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notion, in my

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pupils can learn from

peer

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peers

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in

more

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a more

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effective way.

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examples for better understanding. To commence with, the main reason why I believe peers are better

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is because no generation gap between

peer

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and pupils.

In other words

,no doubt teachers have more specialized knowledge of their courses but

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they are teaching their students with the same techniques which they used during their education period.

Whereas

, fellows use

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method of teaching and explain everything in

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way by repheresing content which

make

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it easier for

pupil

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pupils

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to

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grasp

grab

.

For example

, in 10th

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standard,

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I was not good in Math, even

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attended numerous classes but

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I failed

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class

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the class

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test

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tests

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then

I took

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the help

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of one of my

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classmates

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who taught me

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according to

my level of understanding, and

as a result

, I scored well in

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the final

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exam.

Apart from

this

, it is easy to access peers in comparison to instructors. To explain, individuals can call their classmates and

colleague

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colleagues

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if they have

doubt

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doubts

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while

learning or working at home.

However

, they can clear their problems with their educators only during the specific time periods as trainers have responsibility for

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individuals

also

.

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easy reach of pupils towards their peers

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allows

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them to gain understanding without any delay.

For instance

, throughout my training

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Amazon, I took help from my co-worker as learning from

supervisor

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the supervisor

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was

time consuming

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because of the process which everyone

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to follow for

any

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guidance.

To conclude

,

although

teachers and managers have

indepth

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in-depth

in depth

knowledge of courses and work procedures, training from fellows

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makes

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the learning process effective with flexibility and

repherasing

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rephrasing

.