The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
This
bar line illustrates the yearly income of a number of households in the United States for three years.
To begin
, it is obvious that the amount of salary fluctuated during the years.
According to
this
graph, the highest was seen by the individuals who earned more than $100,000, which had the top record in 2007 and 2015.
On the other hand
, the lowest wage was about less than $25,000, which had a slight fluctuation over these three years. The other groups of incomes that were more average, remained slightly the same. Expect the $75,000-$99,999 that increase from 26
million
to nearly 30.
Then
decrease again.
However
,
this
time only for one
million
.
Overall
, the highest figure during the time belonged to $100,000 or more, which reached a peak of almost 34
million
in 2015. Yet the $75,000-$99,999 which has never gone above 15
million
, held the
last
rank.
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