The line graph illustrates average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how much Americans spent annually on mobile and
landline
services
between 2001 and 2010.
It is evident that while
the average yearly cost of mobile phone
usage increased significantly during this
period, spending on traditional landline
connections saw a dramatic decline.
In 2001, the typical American resident paid approximately 700 dollars
for landline
services
, while
spending only about 200 dollars
on cellular options. However
, from that year onward, the yearly cost of mobile services
began to rise, while
expenditure on residential phone
lines started to decrease.
By 2006, the average annual costs for both mobile and landline
services
had converged at around 520 dollars
. From this
point forward, Americans spent more on cellular services
than on traditional phone
lines. By 2010, the typical expenditure on mobile phone
usage had risen to about 750 dollars
, while
spending on landline
services
dropped to its lowest level, standing at roughly 410 dollars
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