The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of young people aged from 25 to 34 in the UK in terms of housing over a certain period of time from 2004 to 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there was an upward trend in percentages of
renters
while
homeowners
went down. Having looked at the bar chart for more details, we can see that in 2014, the percentage of young people who had their own houses reached a peak at around 60%. After 2 years, the proportion of
homeowners
vaguely decreased to nearly 55% and
then
slightly climbed to a little above 58%.
In addition
, in the next 4 years, the percentage of
homeowners
gradually dropped to around 43% and remained stable in 2012.
Then
went down again to nearly 37% in 2014.
By contrast
, the proportion of
renters
was the lowest in 2004 with just 20% compared to
homeowners
at that time.
However
,
renters
started to steadily rise in the next few years, from 2005 to 2010 at around 35%.
Additionally
, the percentage of
renters
was unchanged in 2011 and 2012,
then
jumped significantly to approximately 50% in 2014.
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