The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of young people aged from 25 to 34 in the UK in terms of housing over a certain period of time from 2004 to 2014.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there was an upward trend in percentages of
renters
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while
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homeowners
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went down. Having looked at the bar chart for more details, we can see that in 2014, the percentage of young people who had their own houses reached a peak at around 60%. After 2 years, the proportion of
homeowners
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vaguely decreased to nearly 55% and
then
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slightly climbed to a little above 58%.
In addition
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, in the next 4 years, the percentage of
homeowners
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gradually dropped to around 43% and remained stable in 2012.
Then
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went down again to nearly 37% in 2014.
By contrast
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, the proportion of
renters
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was the lowest in 2004 with just 20% compared to
homeowners
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at that time.
However
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,
renters
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started to steadily rise in the next few years, from 2005 to 2010 at around 35%.
Additionally
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, the percentage of
renters
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was unchanged in 2011 and 2012,
then
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jumped significantly to approximately 50% in 2014.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words renters, homeowners with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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