The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.
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The pie charts below compare
boys
and girls
engaging with
six different cultural and leisure activities.
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the proportion of reading is the big difference between countered groups. In addition
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as well as
boys
like many activities which girls
do not.
10% of both groups are interested in listening to music which is the least girl’s preference. As well as
the most significant contrast goes for reading with 21% for girls
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Moreover
, dancing is the highest percentage of girl’s activities with 27%. In addition
, boys
like basketball, skateboarding and, soccer with 26%, 11% and, 17% respectively. Whereas
, girls
prefer to do gymnastics and netball with 11% and 15% in order.Submitted by nikimohamadi72 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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