The chart below shows the employment rates of the 25 to 34-year and 55 to 64-year-old population according to the highest level of education attained in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates the employment values of the 25 to 34
years
and 55 to 64 Use synonyms
years
old people based Use synonyms
to
the topest level of education attained in two different Change preposition
on
years
.
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Overall
, it can be seen that 2015 is higher than 2005 in every sector.
Looking at the 25-34 Linking Words
years
data sets, It is evident that below upper secondary students got 62% Use synonyms
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of job
job
in 2005 but it Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
exprienced
little Correct your spelling
experienced
deacres
in 2015 amount was 57%. Correct your spelling
decrease
Upper
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The upper
seceondary
rate was nearly 80% and Correct your spelling
secondary
its
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it
also
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followed
semilar
trend in 2015, Correct your spelling
similar
was
about 73%. Correct pronoun usage
which was
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no- Add a hyphen
Post-secondary
teriary
and Correct your spelling
tertiary
teritary
were the top Correct your spelling
tertiary
territory
value
in Fix the agreement mistake
values
this
graph. nearly 85% in 2005 and Linking Words
reamained
same at 2015, respectively.
Looking at the 55-64 Correct your spelling
remained
years
data sets, Use synonyms
It is clear that
below upper secondary students got 40% Linking Words
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of job
job
in 2005 but in 2015 it increased Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
at
nearly 50. Change preposition
to
Upper
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The upper
seceondary
is the Correct your spelling
secondary
avarage
rate in Correct your spelling
average
this
graph Linking Words
its
was 55 in 2005 but in 2015 it Correct pronoun usage
it
feel
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felt
little
higher about 60%. Correct article usage
a little
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no- Add a hyphen
Post-secondary
teriary
and Correct your spelling
tertiary
teritary
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tertiary
was
not higher than Change the verb form
were
younger
group Add an article
the younger
it
respectively, 60%, Correct pronoun usage
apply
61
% in 2005 Correct word choice
and 61
at the end
year 2015, Linking Words
amount
was 62% and 67.Add an article
the amount
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