The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occured in London between 2003 and 2012.
The presented line graph shows how many crimes have happened in terms of types (armed
robbery
, assoult
and Correct your spelling
assault
murder
) from
2003 and 2012 in London.
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between
Overall
, it is obvious that while
the number
of murdering activities
decreased sharply, assaulting began to be the main type of crime. In
a similar time, Murdering Change preposition
At
were
the least common type of criminal Change the verb form
was
activities
, experiencing Fix the agreement mistake
activity
with
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apply
initial
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the initial
an initial
result
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results
at the end
of the period with some fluctuation.
As for the
armed Correct article usage
apply
robbery
, by 2003, it was the most common way of doing crime, accounting for almost 3,500, followed by increasing its number
to 3,700 in 2004. After such
rise
, the proportion of armed Correct article usage
a rise
robbery
fell sharply in Fix the agreement mistake
robberies
an
upcoming 4 years Correct article usage
the
untill
2008, becoming the second popular option for robberies, Correct your spelling
until
about
1,100 armed Change preposition
with about
robbery
activities
. This
trend caused to rise slightly, accounted
for exactly 1,500 after one year. From 2009 to 2012, the Wrong verb form
accounting
number
of armed robberies remained unchanged.
When it comes to assaulting, it is clear that
the number
of assaulting activities
was below and above of
2,500 during the whole period, starting with 2,300 assaults in 2003 and reaching the lowest point in 2006 with 2000. Change preposition
apply
This
continued by showing similar
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a similar
the similar
number
of assaults by 2008 after it went up slightly. Then
, it grew gradually, reaching the highest point of all crimes. Murder
became the least common means of crime of all time. In 2003, 500 murdering activities
have been done. During 2005, the number
of murder
almost doubled Fix the agreement mistake
murders
with
900 and Change preposition
to
then
experienced with slight decrease untill
2007 Correct your spelling
until
with showing
initial Verb problem
the
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
murder
. From 2008 to 2012, there was minor fluctuation, accounting Fix the agreement mistake
murders
500
and 550, respectively.Change preposition
for 500
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Vocabulary: Replace the words robbery, murder, number, activities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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