The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occured in London between 2003 and 2012.

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,

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assault

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2003 and 2012 in London.

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, it is obvious that

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the

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of murdering

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decreased sharply, assaulting began to be the main type of crime.

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a similar time, Murdering

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the least common type of criminal

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, experiencing

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at the end

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of the period with some fluctuation. As for

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armed

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, by 2003, it was the most common way of doing crime, accounting for almost 3,500, followed by increasing its

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to 3,700 in 2004. After

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, the proportion of armed

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robbery

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robberies

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fell sharply in

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upcoming 4 years

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2008, becoming the second popular option for robberies,

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1,100 armed

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activities

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trend caused to rise slightly,

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for exactly 1,500 after one year. From 2009 to 2012, the

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of armed robberies remained unchanged. When it comes to assaulting,

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the

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of assaulting

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was below and above

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2,500 during the whole period, starting with 2,300 assaults in 2003 and reaching the lowest point in 2006 with 2000.

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continued by showing

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of assaults by 2008 after it went up slightly.

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, it grew gradually, reaching the highest point of all crimes.

Murder

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became the least common means of crime of all time. In 2003, 500 murdering

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have been done. During 2005, the

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murders

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almost doubled

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900 and

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experienced with slight decrease

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2007

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initial

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. From 2008 to 2012, there was minor fluctuation, accounting

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and 550, respectively.