You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: where you went-delhi, histoical art museum what you saw there-art , jewllery , how you felt about it-old time, referesh
Dear Ava,
How're you doing?
its
been Replace the word
it's
it is
while
since we Correct article usage
a while
last
talked.I want to share my recent expirence
about Correct your spelling
experience
museum
that Add an article
a museum
the museum
i
have visited Change the capitalization
I
while
i
was on my trip in India.
During my visit, I had Change the capitalization
I
chance
to visit the museum in west Delhi which has Add an article
a chance
the chance
collection
rich with art, Correct article usage
a collection
Correct word choice
and Jewllery
Jewllery
from all around the world. It was Correct your spelling
jewellery
area
with lots of Add an article
an area
the area
treffic
during rush hours.
I saw Correct your spelling
traffic
jewllery
and art Correct your spelling
jewellery
collection
from 1800 to today's date and they are fully Fix the agreement mistake
collections
perserved
and secured by the gallery. I Correct your spelling
preserved
also
came across and beautiful grown
worn by the Correct your spelling
gown
Indain
Queen Correct your spelling
Indian
name
Rajeshvari in Replace the word
named
1500 's
. The outfit has beautiful work of Correct article usage
the 1500 's
embordiary
and Correct your spelling
embroidery
i
think Change the capitalization
I
i
will always remember Change the capitalization
I
this
outfit i
till the day Correct pronoun usage
apply
i
die. The photography wasn't allowed at the gallery Change the capitalization
I
otherwise
, I would have shown you the majestical piece of clothing.
The expirence
was Correct your spelling
experience
betond
the words, It made me feel like Correct your spelling
beyond
that
I am living Correct word choice
apply
that
era when these pieces Change preposition
in that
was
created , after looking at them. It was quite refreshing for me as Change the verb form
were
i
was Change the capitalization
I
exhusted
from Correct your spelling
exhausted
trip
. I would love for you Add an article
the trip
a trip
have
Fix the infinitive
to have
this
experince
as Correct your spelling
experience
i
know you like art so much.
Hope to meet you soon so that Change the capitalization
I
i
can share the details about Change the capitalization
I
rest
of my vacation.
Love,
RaniCorrect article usage
the rest
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grammar
Work on spelling and grammar. Addressing the errors will make your writing clearer and more professional. For example, 'expirence' should be 'experience' and 'embordiary' should be 'embroidery.'
coherence
Try to maintain a consistent use of tenses throughout your letter. This will improve clarity and coherence.
task response
The letter addresses all parts of the task well, giving details of the visit and personal reflections.
writing tone
The writing tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.
coherence
The letter is structured logically with clear paragraphs for each point.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,