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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph depicts the number of
Japan’s
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population
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 and the table illustrates the distribution of
Japan’s
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population
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 which over-65 years old from 1950 to its future in 2055.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the highest
population
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 in Japan occurred in 2005
while
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 the largest
Japan’s
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 elderly
population
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 is expected in 2055.
To begin
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 with,
Japan’s
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 people stood at 84.1
million
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 in 1950. From
this
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 point onwards,
this
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 rate experienced steady growth and reached a peak at 127.8
million
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 in 2005.
Thereafter
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, the number of Japanese citizens decreased slightly by 2.4
million
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 in 2015. In 2035,
Japan’s
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population
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 will fall considerably to 110
million
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 and is set to hit the base of 89.9
million
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 in 2055.
On the other hand
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,
Japan’s
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 elderly people started at 4.1
million
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 representing 4.9% of the total
population
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 and
this
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 figure comprised five times 25.7
million
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 representing 20% of the total
population
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. In 2035 and 2055, the over-65 years old citizens will calculate 37.2
million
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 and 36.5
million
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, respectively representing 34.0 % and 41% of the total
population
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,
accordingly
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan’s, population, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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