The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. T1 Bar Charts - EducationT
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The previous bar charts illustrate the number of
women
and men
who attended part-time or full-time higher education
in England during three different years.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that at the beginning of the period (1970), there were more male students attending full-time education
than females. The same figure is shown for part-time education
, however
, the number of both genders is much lower. In addition
, although
at the end
of the period (1990), female students attending full-time education
showed a higher number than men
, both genders showed a similar figure for part-time education
.
On one
hand, in 1970, full-time male students showcased a higher figure than females at around 1000. Correct article usage
the one
Nevertheless
, although
the rates were quite low, opposite data was recorded for part-time education
with a higher rate of men
(at around 100) than women
(at around 30). A slightly different pattern occurred in 1980, with more full-time and fewer part-time male learners than women
in the same year.
On the other hand
, at the end
of the period in 1990, women
exhibited their highest attendance rate for full-time at around 1100, while
men
depicted a lower one at around 900. In contrast
, for part-time education
women
and men
demonstrated a similar rate of around 200.Submitted by nila.hiperu on
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