The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The process charts illustrate the production of
fish
pie.
Overall
, is a linear, man-made process with 2 main stages started
with the delivery of Wrong verb form
starting
potatoes
and fresh salmon and, finished
with the frozen Wrong verb form
finishing
fish
pies stored or ready to dispatch.
First of all, up to one month
the Add a comma
month,
potatoes
has
delivered. After Wrong verb form
will be
that
the Add a comma
that,
potatoes
are cleaned, peeled, cut in slices, boiled, chilled and stored in bags until their use.
After that, just under 12 hours, the fresh salmon arrive at the factory. Subsequently
, the slices of fish
are embedded with lemon juice and salted. Then
the salmon is cooked in a steam oven. Following that the skin and bones are removed by hand and inspected. The fish
is added in a
preparation with peas, sauce, and Remove the article
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
potatoes
that had been storage
before, all Replace the word
stored
this
product is mixed and wrapped and saved in the fridge and then
storage
or Replace the word
stored
dispatch
for Wrong verb form
dispatched
consume
.Replace the word
consumption
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, potatoes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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