The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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fish

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pie.

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, is a linear, man-made process with 2 main stages

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with the delivery of

potatoes

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and fresh salmon and,

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with the frozen

fish

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pies stored or ready to dispatch. First of all, up to one

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the

potatoes

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has

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delivered. After

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the

potatoes

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are cleaned, peeled, cut in slices, boiled, chilled and stored in bags until their use. After that, just under 12 hours, the fresh salmon arrive at the factory.

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, the slices of

fish

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are embedded with lemon juice and salted.

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the salmon is cooked in a steam oven. Following that the skin and bones are removed by hand and inspected. The

fish

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is added in

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preparation with peas, sauce, and

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potatoes

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that had been

storage

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stored

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before, all

this

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product is mixed and wrapped and saved in the fridge and

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storage

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or

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for

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consumption

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.